That’s what I’m stuck on.

Chapter Thirteen. It feels flat, it just doesn’t feel exciting to me, and because it is kind of a pivotal scene where everything now starts unravelling, it needs to be….there. I worked on it today, and was able to do some of the editing to get it where I need it to be, but it still needs a lot of work. I know it’s time to move on…to just leave it and try to fix it later…but I feel uneasy about doing that…like if I don’t get this “right enough” (not perfect), then I just can’t go to the next scene.

Yes, I am just a tad frustrated….but, I’m not giving up. I will whip this chapter into shape in the next couple of days.

I will. I have to.